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Friday 18 September 2015

Talking points

Our literacy class have been learning about having a group discussion and agree/disagree of what the persons thinking of. Example school should finish at 1am would you agree or disagree and why?

Wednesday 9 September 2015

Being Cyber Smart on Phones

Today with Miss Kyla we learnt how to be cyber smart on our mobile phone. Which means being smart on our phone. Here is my Google drive with all the information on being cyber smart with phones.

Explanation Writing

Today in literacy class we are writing an Explanation on how to prevent yourself from sick. This means staying healthy and getting rid of nasty germs heading towards you. And causing you and others getting sick from invading germs. Here is My explanation of getting it all away.

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Remember the S.E.E structure.
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Statement - Use a sentence starter to state a cause - To prevent yourself from getting sick you...
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Explain - Define the cause - this means . . .
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Evidence/Example - explain the effect of the cause - if you do that then . . .

Title
What is your Explanation about?
How to prevent yourself from getting sick.
Introduction
What are you going to explain?  Why is it important for us to pay attention to what you have to say?
We are learning about how to prevent yourself from getting sick. If you want to learn how to stay healthy keep on reading.
Paragraph One
What is the first way you we can prevent yourself from getting sick?  How does that prevent people getting sick?
One of the easiest ways of staying healthy is eating a balanced range of food. This means eating from the 5 food groups with a focus on fruits and vegetables. If you do that then your body will receive all the nutrients it needs to be in the best condition to fight off invading germs.
Paragraph Two
What is the second way we can prevent yourself from getting sick? How does that prevent people getting sick?
Another way to from staying healthy is to wash your hands frequently This means Washing your hands with soap for 2 or 3 minutes. This also means drying your hands thoroughly until their dry. If you do that then you’ll have no more nasty germs spreading.

Paragraph Three
What is the third way you can prevent yourself from getting sick?  How does that prevent people getting sick
A final way to prevent yourself from getting sick is to not shake hands with a sick person. This means trying to avoid shaking hands with That sick person. Instead you should  give them a thumbs up or greet them in a nice way. If you do this you'll stop the germs spreading. And won’t get you sick.
Conclusion
The conclusion sums up all the ideas and repeats a key message to end.  This could be a recommendation or a personal connection.
If you follow these rules on how to prevent yourself from getting sick you will stay healthy and strong.  It may also stop you from going to the doctors. I hope you all manage to stay healthy and live a long happy life without germs.